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Story, Art, Colors & Letters by;
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Hmmm the art is good as is the coloring, but the Dialog is a bit off and didn't make too much sense to me.

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Interesting. I'm not sure I was able to follow the story very well, but I really liked the art.

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A little pain never hurt anyone. ;)
Ivan really needs to get someone to proofread his English.

It's a cool concept though.

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I agree. The idea is very cool, the art is fantastic...but it suffers from the sloppy 2nd Language English.
Nice concept and great art. The scene feels a bit rushed and cramped for a single page though.
Other than needing a good editing (sorry, Ivan, but that's the truth, like 'Zeke and Nuclear said), intriguing story references. Garrus-9, a human is involved, and the "Spike Project". :3

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Garrus 9? isn't that a Mass Effect Refference? or maybe the other way? XD

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Nice... so Fortress Maximus is somehow the new Autobot prison, and Spike's the warden, eh?

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