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The Last Sentinel by *Transformers-Mosaic:iconTransformers-Mosaic:

Categories Fan Art > Manga/Anime > Digital > Fan Comics

©2009-2010 *Transformers-Mosaic
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Story by;
Josh van Reyk [link]

Art, Colors & Letters by;
Tim Pugh [link]

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:iconnuclearconvoy:
~NuclearConvoy Jan 1, 2009, 11:42:17 PM
The dialogue seems a bit off in this. It feels sort of stunted, like it needs maybe a bit more elaboration to make me really care about it.
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~lonegamer7 Jan 2, 2009, 12:10:46 AM
I'll agree with Nuclear that the dialogue feels a bit stunted, but there's still that bit of hint.

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:iconallykat81:
*allykat81 Jan 2, 2009, 1:20:23 AM
I like it. It kinda seemed to have the way the original Omega talked in the cartoon.
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~ninjha Jan 2, 2009, 5:40:10 AM
Nice! I get it. The dialogue is all in Omega Supreme's head.
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*TaintedTamer Jan 2, 2009, 8:10:58 AM
Aw, poor Omega...

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~JazZeke Jan 2, 2009, 9:48:53 AM
It does seem like there's a gap in the dialogue, but the piece nevertheless carries the emotional impact the writer was going for. It's a good piece.

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Mood: Love =Gharanth Jan 2, 2009, 10:35:41 AM
I like the way it's written as his thoughts. Definitely in Omega Supreme's style!

Awesome work.

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~deadcal Jan 2, 2009, 11:07:10 AM
I think the character designs are very clean and very well inked, but the background doesn't mesh too well with them.
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