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Story by;
Josh van Reyk [link]

Art, Colors & Letters by;
Tim Pugh [link]

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:iconnuclearconvoy:
The dialogue seems a bit off in this. It feels sort of stunted, like it needs maybe a bit more elaboration to make me really care about it.
:iconlonegamer7:
I'll agree with Nuclear that the dialogue feels a bit stunted, but there's still that bit of hint.

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:iconallykat81:
I like it. It kinda seemed to have the way the original Omega talked in the cartoon.
:iconninjha:
Nice! I get it. The dialogue is all in Omega Supreme's head.
:icontaintedtamer:
Aw, poor Omega...

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:iconjazzeke:
It does seem like there's a gap in the dialogue, but the piece nevertheless carries the emotional impact the writer was going for. It's a good piece.

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:icongharanth:
I like the way it's written as his thoughts. Definitely in Omega Supreme's style!

Awesome work.

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:icondeadcal:
I think the character designs are very clean and very well inked, but the background doesn't mesh too well with them.

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